basics

1. Does your character has a long, rare or unusual name? [if she lives in japan, japanese name is not unusual] +1

Donnie Kiona (guys name for girl, but that was my error [0]

2. Does your character has more than one first/second name for no reason? +1

Donnie, DK (nicknames) [0]

3. [count all that apply]
She`s not a human? +1
Half a human? +1
[half]An Angel? +1
[half]A Vampire? +1
[half]A Werewolf? +1

Donnie Kiona (mage) [0]

4. She belongs to a royal family? +1

Nope [0]

5. Does she have amnesia? +1
It heals as the story goes on? +1

DK only 5-7 years oh her life rare to remeber that far back anyway..., [1]

Looks

1. She has very long hair or hair with unusual colour? +1
Is she blonde? +1

I count that as a discrimination against blondes [2]

2. She has wings? +1

Nope. [2]

3. She has no overweight tough she doesn`t look after what she eats/ doesn`t exercise +1

Eats only sushi. Underweight justified [2]

4. Her bra size is B< ? +1

B [2]

5. Does she belong to some kind of label? [ex. Punk, Goth, Lolita, Emo, Prep, etc.] +1

Bright colored emo! [2]

6. Her eyes have a weird colour +1
is it red? +1

Green [2]

7. Do you describe her looks in the first chapter? +1
Do you use words "gorgeous" "mysterious" "stunning" "beutiful" "perfect" when describing her? +1

I don't think i mentioned her in first chapter..... [2]

Past

1. She had a terrible past +1
and she angsts about it +1

not terrible. just rejectfull. [2] doesn't angst.

2. is she an orphan? +1

Adopted orphan? [2.5]

3. was she physicaly abused? +1
mentaly abused? +1
raped? +1
all the other characters know that +1

Ditched by parents. [3]

5. she saw a death of her family member +1
it was her fault +1
she only thinks it was her fault +1

No one died [3]

Character

1. She has a very dark or very cheery character +1

Cheery >.>'' [4]

2. She has no enemies +1

>.>'''' [5]

3. She has no friends +1

Plenty. [5]

4. She has a "big point of view" [ex. "It`s ok that my BF left me, there are so many other boys in the world"] +1

doesn't have a BF (yet cough cough) but is not judgemental and open to all unless reason for dislike is given [5.5]

5. She has a best friend that stays that way during all the story +1

Uh....BFFs stay with? or stay the same? [6]

6. Everyone who dislikes her ends up humiliated, arrested and/or dead +1
Killed by her +1
Killed by her boyfriend +1

Rehabilitated. [6]

7. She always understands others and gives the answer to any problem of their life +1

Ohhh yes. [7]

8. She shares same characteristics/hobbies with a cannon character +1

Cheerfullness? Magic? Darkness? Love? Acceptance? [8]


Romance

1. Your character seems to have more romance than all the other characters in the story +1

Uh, crush but no boyfriend. Her sister gets married though.... [8]

2. her boyfriend is a cannon character +1
more than one cannon character +1
a character from a cannon couple +1
a character you would like to have as boyfriend +1
it was love from the first sight +1

crush atm. but yea. Allen Walker = <3 [10]

3. she`s bisexual +1

Nope. [10]

4. she had sex with a cannon character +1
more than one cannon character +1
a character you would like to have sex with +1

No. [10]


Other

1.she`s a musician +1
a rockstar +1
a dancer +1
a hacker +1

play's piano. CRAPPILY. half hacker (no where near other OC's level) [11]

2.she`s better than a cannon character in some specific area he/she`s good at [ex. better in taijutsu than rock lee, smarter than L, etc.] +1

OMG! DEATH NOTE! NARUTO! and no. [11]
btw, she's part of a mega cross over. therefore you gotta specify.

3.she`s not from a country the story is taking place +1
she somehow popped in the fictional world from the real world +1

^.^ Magnolia is awesome [12]

4.she doesn`t have to pay for her actions/crimes/misitakes +1

IS the one who kicks missbehaving friends' butts [12]

5. her enemies are complete opposites of her +1

Not always. [12]

6. she looks like one of the cannon characters/character from other anime +1

Did before *coughsailormooncough*, that's why i changed her eye color [12]

To the anti-sue traits!

2. remove one point if your character is a smoker

3. she has a desiese that doesn`t heal during the story -1

DK [11]

4. she has overweight [a little doesn`t count] -1

Nope. [11]

5. she`s in love with a character who doesn`t love her back -1
Ouch. [11]

6. she`s weak mentaly or physicaly -1

Hell no. [11]

Results~
Donnie Kiona [11]

less than 5 points- the anti-sue

your character is definetly an opposite of mary sue! It`s obvious that you`ve been trying to protect your character from suedom, but a few more good traits wouldn`t hurt.

5-15 points original character

congratulations! You`ve created an interesting, well-balanced original character! ^-^ you sure need a lot of skills to create such a great character, good job!

15-25 points boarding-sue

hmm... i can`t say your character is a mary-sue, but it`s really close to it! You should edit hera little to make her more realistic and interesting!

25-35 points the mary-sue

my oh my, we have a trouble! D: I understand that you tried to create a nice and interesting character that others would like, but you`ve overdone it. Remember, a character has to have flaws! If you don`t want to ruin your fanfiction, try to rework your character.

35< points the ultra-sue

OH MY GOD, NOT THAT! BURN IT! You`ve created a monster, my friend. Take a blank sheet and create another, more realistic character.